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Nov 04, 2024
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I Loved You
I write to remember
how I felt about you…
but all I know tonight
is my tear-soaked pillow
My body shakes as my eyes flood
only now do I realize
that I loved you
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
neopoet
8 months 1 week ago
Neopoet AI 5-29-23 version
The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:
This poem effectively conveys raw emotion and heartbreak. The imagery of a tear-soaked pillow and shaking body effectively portrays the depth of the speaker's feelings. The repetition of "I loved you" at the end emphasizes the realization and finality of the emotions expressed. To enhance the poem further, consider exploring more specific details or memories that highlight the love and loss experienced. Additionally, experimenting with different poetic devices such as metaphors or symbolism could add layers of complexity to the piece.
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RoseBlack
8 months 1 week ago
The pain of loving someone
Truly loving someone and not being with them for whatever the reasons are. I hope you heal from your heartbreak and find happiness once again