I miss you

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem effectively conveys a sense of longing and heartache through its concise and emotive language. The repetition of "cry" creates a strong emotional impact, emphasizing the speaker's inner turmoil. The use of short, fragmented lines enhances the feeling of vulnerability and raw emotion. Consider exploring more vivid imagery or specific details to further engage the reader and deepen the emotional resonance of the poem. Additionally, you may want to experiment with varying the structure or form to add complexity and nuance to the overall theme of unrequited love and loss.

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a cry in the dark... good work!

*hugs, Cat

your title doesn't quite match up with the poem.
I think that you might say; "You Left" and still get the same effect.
I say this, because you have written that "I miss you"...
If you wish to change the line, "I miss you" and say: I [will] miss you."
I think that will do very nicely. ~Geez.
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