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Esker
Esker
Apr 26, 2012 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

I N T E R O . .N O I R E

breath the blood of night
staining dark mauve
veins velvet
punctured harsh
dark lust raining
drops to parch

song of lark
arrive the night
tis the sweet
trill for the
death of night

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About This Poem

Last Few Words: shall remain "yours" in this eternal lull while hell holds what heaven shall not dwell my Pretti P Mr Wolf ~

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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judyanne

judyanne

13 years 2 months ago

three 'nights' esker

is there any way of using other words for two of them?

as usual - another intriguing write from you
keeps my mind active

i really like
'breath the blood of night
staining dark mauve
... dark lust raining
drops to parch'

love judy
xxx

Esker

Esker

13 years 2 months ago

but of course Ms Anne

"Dusk" would replace the first night,
"song of larks
arrive the sight" for the second replacement,
"trill for the death of Midnight" would be the
final change commencement.

I remember a Wiccan freind whom I met
in a psychiatric ward whose evocative
banter would invoke with the play of
threes in speech

the poetry like wording of followings
and language as escort for
the entrance to indoctrination is
a study of mine
Like periphery vision
with age it needs its sharp
refinement when the main
gain feed loses its signal
or if truly ones vision is
or has been altered from
birth the rest of the senses
become discerning

Thank You Judy