I Want You To Know

Before being sandwiched
in every day's mundane chores,
those frivolous issues, and some more,
I come to read you,

I smile.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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Comments

raj

10 years 7 months ago

Rula

Good one but needs more..push the accelerator and continue to drive...you know what i mean?

Regards,

Rula

10 years 7 months ago

I know what you mean, you might be right, but sometimes it comes to you like this. Just a thought and you like it as is , no more no less. May be I should have posted it rather as a blog. But I appreciate your thoughts and the visit.
Thank you.

emogothgirl

10 years 7 months ago

well

i think it's perfect. it made ME smile :) nice little write.

mag

Rula

10 years 7 months ago

if I could draw a smile

On someone's face every morning, then my mission is accomplished :)
Thank you for your visit and the comment.

wesley snow

10 years 7 months ago

If I asked you to change it,

would you?

Rula

10 years 6 months ago

Sir

Would never like to go against whatever suggested for improvement, especially when it comes from my dear mentor, but I don't have anything to add to this little piece.
It is how it is intended. If I have got your question right sir.