Lavender

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I Wonder

The pattern
of seashells

The silence
of deer

The feelings
of trees

The scent
of cinnamon

The color
of your eyes.

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About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: United States

Favorite Poets: I tend to read Ted Kooser, Jim Harrison, Billy Collins, Paul Simon, Robert Frost. I like minimalist poetry, and poems reflecting on nature and Mother Earth.

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Comments

Lavender

4 years 8 months ago

Good morning, Jerry!

When I wrote this, I felt it was someone imagining meeting a new lover - but it also reminded me of many of my thoughts when I was expecting the birth of my children. Much to ponder in life!
Thank you!
L

Captain

4 years 8 months ago

Beautiful. Nuf said.

Lavender

4 years 8 months ago

Hello, Captain

Thank you very much for reading and your kind comment!
Appreciated!
Lavender

lovedly

4 years 8 months ago

beauty lies in poetry

if it speaks oceanic
within one autumn leaf
urs is
'tis

just by the way
my eyes are
cynosure

Lavender

4 years 8 months ago

Hello, Lovedly

As always, thank you very much!
L

Lavender

4 years 8 months ago

Hello, Teddy

(Thought I responded earlier today. Not certain where my first attempt may have found itself. ???)
I share your hope that masks and social distancing will fade away - sooner than later, but safely for sure. Thank you for reading! I am always grateful when you stop by.
L

Lavender

4 years 8 months ago

Hi, Jerry

You are too funny... So, is your puppy wearing a Super Hero costume?!
L

c lynn brooks

4 years 8 months ago

Lavender

your poem just sent my mind in motion the simplicity of this work is just beautiful loved it

Lavender

4 years 8 months ago

Hello, Chrys

Life is full of endless things to wonder about. Thank you for your lovely comments.
L