I Wonder If You Are Reading This And If You Understand What I'm Asking

i am ready for your crushing blow

break my jaw

slam your fist into my teeth

and, smiling,

i will be sure to thank you

for at least being honest

and saying something to my face

for once.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: somewhere in the middle of the mountains, USA

Favorite Poets: life.

Comments

weirdelf

12 years 4 months ago

Good title!

Yes, I understand. Insults and slander behind one's back are more painful than physical pain, because there is no defence.

Remember to punch them back though!

A powerful poem.

emogothgirl

12 years 4 months ago

well thank goodness

i'm actually planning on submitting this to my school's literary magazine. i'll let you know if they get it, too :)
thanks,
mag

Ian.T

12 years 4 months ago

Mag

As Jess says this is powerful, about time you told them or shot them, but just tell them will do..
Yes a good submission to the magazine, we await the report on this one.
Yours Ian.T