IAN..You are the only one who supports me

how then can I ever forget thee
my friendly one
and
you are the only one
who likens me to a bard
here none have done

Stan and Ian
are two solid pillars
of Neopoet …
without both the table may fall

then only Loved will be on call
but
Ian you read so much
you are not jobless as I
but that you devote so much time
makes me question
as to why…..

PERHAPS YOU WANT TO KEEP
NEOPOETS ALIVE

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

Raven Maelstrom

11 years 10 months ago

bode well bard

From what I've seen it may seem this neo newbie hasn't read your stream
the truth be told I'm not so bold to jest so early on I've picked my way
every other day upon a bard or two I apologize too ...I haven't got to you
My skills are thin I'm not sure when I'll be of any use
but I'll do my best unlike some of the rest to give your stuff a reply
know my dear no workshop here I've only just arrived
but give me time I'm back here from 09 now "loved" is a loved
find of mine
The above really stinks, I just wanted you to know your point is well taken and I don't want to fall into the category of complacency when the goal is for ALL to excel by virtue of encouraging and refining one another. Well done!

loved

11 years 10 months ago

thanks Raven it appears to me you have come from

heaven
read some
at least seven

Ian.T

11 years 10 months ago

Loved

Now I am mentioned in dispatches , I suppose that's all that one can wish for in life.
You take care young Bard, and many thanks, will see what happens to our words, Yours Ian.T

PS:- I am once again not happy with the response of the poets here to the workshop of Jesses, and in general the stream, but I shall say it may be that time of the year and give them all the excuses, they need, and wait for the Winters long nights to kindle their awareness of the stream..