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lovedly
lovedly
Oct 21, 2015 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

if I only knew

if I only knew
Why would I come to ask you
Await my deliberations will you
I shall start afresh anew

If only I knew
why should I divulge to you
just for a comments too few

what ails me to reach my goal
If only I knew
why would I ask you

Well stand by as you say
I must address myself
God pray

If only I knew
I'd love to share with you
what I'd love to do
to have to give to share

If only I knew

The lips would part
like two lips as you show
so beautifully

Yes but only If I knew
what you want to know
about me

if I only knew
Yes, If only
I knew .....

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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raj

9 years 8 months ago

i believe through oversight

i believe through oversight you have missed the "I" in the concluding verse Lovedly...I note that you have adopted a different style...good to know that..

Regards,