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If I Were Asked

If I were asked what would I miss,
if missing was to be,
I'd take the time to sit a while
with countless cups of tea.

I'd pull an extra saucer out,
another cup for you,
and we would linger on the porch
at least an hour or two.

Then we would rise to walk the lane
where berries greet the gate.
Perhaps we'd stop to gather them,
perhaps our stroll could wait.

While gazing at the endless sky,
I'd hear the sun suggest
that shadows dally over fields,
and Earth should pause to rest.

And if I had to answer, then,
if asked of me once more,
what I would miss, if missing be,
I'd answer as before.

I'd take the time to sit a while,
let daylight be my friend,
so I would never miss a thing,
and life would never end.

The cups of tea, the berries, sweet,
the shadows where we'd hide,
would always be, as you, with me,
forever by my side.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: As I get older, I appreciate family and friends, especially when the world seems to make no sense. L.

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: United States

Favorite Poets: I tend to read Ted Kooser, Jim Harrison, Billy Collins, Paul Simon, Robert Frost. I like minimalist poetry, and poems reflecting on nature and Mother Earth.

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Ray Miller

5 months 3 weeks ago

If I Were Asked

I'm not sure what purpose the 4th stanza is serving, but the rest is just lovely. Well done.

Lavender

Lavender

5 months 3 weeks ago

Hello, Ray,

The fourth stanza feels like a sigh to me, a moment to just be...
I appreciate your thoughts and help with this, and your generous comments.
Thank you!
L

Rula

Rula

5 months 3 weeks ago

Dearest Lavender

Dearest Lavender
I would very much like to accompany you in such peaceful environment. I believe nothing is more enjoyable than sitting with such an amazing poetess.
I very much like every line here., just my cup of tea:)
Thank you for sharing!

Lavender

Lavender

5 months 3 weeks ago

Hello, My Friend!

It's not hard to imagine sharing a lovely cup of tea with you - even if it's just through poetry. Thank you, as always, for reading!
Take good care,
L

RoseBlack

RoseBlack

5 months 2 weeks ago

Hi L

Sounds like an incredible, peaceful journey to me. In the last year, I have really learned to enjoy tranquility and peace as I am now surrounded by it. What a beautiful way to describe how you would spend just a little more time with what sounds like people you have lost. Well done!

Lavender

Lavender

5 months 2 weeks ago

Hello, Carrie,

How good to see you! I hope you are well. Yes, enjoying and appreciating these beautiful moments I have with family and friends, knowing all too well these moments aren't forever.
Thank you!
L