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If Only

TV opens up the world.
Each distant peak sits so,
behind generic signs for gasoline.
Vague promise feeds the heart;
each scene,
each restaurant view.

The elegance of legs crossed
leisurely. Tanned arms on elbows
leaning in
to coffee cups
like clouds held waiting,
like a sign that says
ten miles to go.

How anxious,
how complete the yearning robbery.
The glamour lads who calculate their visit.

Sunglasses hold back tresses spilled
like lemon grass, like grape vines
overflowing.
Self contained,
yet still an absence.
If only there's an answer,
if only eyes would turn.

The call to call again
when afternoon has let
the shadows fall
and pave the way.

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Sydney, New South Wales, Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Dylan Thomas, T.S Eliot, Stevie Smith, Chaucer, Shakespeare, Marvell, Herbert, Gerald Manley Hopkins, Rilke, Holderlin, Baudelaire, Verlaine, Rimbaud, Valery, Gregory Corso, Alan Ginsberg, Phillip Larkin, Elizabeth Bishop, Wordsworth, Shelley, Keats, Yeats, Ferlinghetti, Tony Hoagland, Ezra Pound, Joni Mitchell, Bob Dylan, Leonard Cohen, Elizabeth Barrett Browning, Browning, Petra Whiteley, Blake, Thomas Hardy, Syvia Plath, Pablo Naruda, Lorca, Cole Porter, A.E Cummings, Walt whitman, Tennyson, Shelley, Byron, Coleridge, Les Murray, Gig Ryan, Edward Dorn, Emily Dickinson, Robert Frost, Seamus Heaney.

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Comments

Rula

Rula

12 years 7 months ago

Excellent Work Ross

and well crafted indeed . Nothing to critique

Lovely closing lines

The call to call again
when afternoon has let
the shadows fall
and pave the way for blessing

It sums it up all.

Ross Hamilton Hill

Ross Hamilton Hill

12 years 7 months ago

Hi Rula

we meet again, thanks for your comment.

Ross Hamilton Hill

Ross Hamilton Hill

12 years 7 months ago

thank ou

I'm still working on this and have changed a few minor details, so glad you liked it.

Seren

Seren

12 years 7 months ago

Sublime poetry Ross I saved

Sublime poetry Ross I saved this one before bed

One of the best poems I've read recently

Love the last stanza

Love Jc xxx

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Frenchf

12 years 7 months ago

I like the way

The modern world has been described in this write starting from the TV and the coffee cups

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Frenchf

12 years 7 months ago

I like the way

The modern world has been described in this write starting from the TV and the coffee cups