If only I had met you...

If only I had met you...
ere a flickering candle threatening!
my life would have been worth the salt all are tasting
just imagine this olllllllleleee soul facing flattering
one day
some day
if not yet today ........

folks like you shall come to read
again and again
and
say

''Pay no heed to anyone ole man
you have performed
and
still at eighty -3 you are'''

thanks for the pat you give
may I bow to Neo
for letting us friends be

About This Poem

Last Few Words: A Hello to friends

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

Lavender

2 years 7 months ago

If Only I Had Met You...

Hello, Lovedly!
I feel as if we have met, through poetry, which might be the best and most authentic self in all of us. You are one of a kind! Thank you for this piece!
Lav

lovedly

2 years 7 months ago

You are one of a kind! WE ALL--- EACH ONE IS....

Thanks Lav for the read

Geezer

2 years 7 months ago

Hmmmm...

I guess this is what I feel. I wish that I had better health, so that I could get out and meet everyone in the flesh and face to face! However, that's not going to happen, so I will have to content myself with the meetings through our works. Not such a bad thing, at least we have a meeting of the minds, which can be more satisfying than physical meetings. [Besides, I am not as good to look at as when I was younger]. Hello, right back! ~ Geez.
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lovedly

2 years 7 months ago

hello Gee

at 61 one can't be 16
nor
18 at 81

time changes
and so
we all must also change with time
in time

to njoi the balance
whatever
is left over

Geezer

2 years 7 months ago

True...

that! ~ Geez.
.

lovedly

2 years 7 months ago

yeps

GEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.......

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 7 months ago

I’m touched

This site is very important to me and I enjoy reading and interacting with everyone. Your poems challenge me as a reader. I’m always looking for underlying things. Sometimes I think there’s a lot under the surface and other times I feel like you are pulling my leg. Either way it’s your language

Tim