If this tender morning...

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem titled "If this tender morning..." demonstrates a strong connection with nature and the changing seasons. The use of metaphors and personification, such as "Autumn's graceful face", effectively conveys the poet's emotions and impressions of autumn. However, the poem could benefit from more consistency in its rhyme scheme and rhythm to enhance its musicality.

The first stanza follows an ABAB rhyme scheme, which is not maintained in the second stanza. Maintaining a consistent rhyme scheme throughout the poem can create a more harmonious reading experience.

Moreover, the rhythm of the poem seems to fluctuate. For example, the first line of the second stanza has eight syllables, while the second line has nine. This inconsistency can disrupt the flow of the poem. By ensuring a more consistent rhythm, the poet can create a smoother, more rhythmic reading experience.

Additionally, the poem could benefit from more specific imagery. While phrases such as "Mother Nature's purity" and "nature sublime" convey the poet's appreciation for nature, they are somewhat abstract. By using more concrete imagery, the poet can create a more vivid and engaging depiction of the autumn morning.

Lastly, the poem's punctuation could be reviewed for consistency. The first stanza ends with a period, while the second stanza does not. Consistent punctuation can help to clarify the poem's structure and meaning.

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Beautiful!
Just what I would do if Autumn was a costume.
I thought may be you'd like to rewrite the title as a first line to be part of the poem's body.
Great writing dearest Cat.

I thought this was beautiful! Your skills keep improving logarithmically, but I agree with Rula and her comment.

So lovely and endearing. Soft and gentle. I have no issue with the title used separately from the body of the poem, especially since you have a four line stanza form, but I can understand the advantage to inserting it as the first line of the poem. This is so graceful, I can visualize the morning slipping down your raised arms and over your shoulders - elegance! I wonder about "a kind of peace" - this feels so supreme, it seems it is the all and absolute "peace."
"There is peace I find divine."
(But that is the way it feels to me.) :)
Beautiful poetry, Cat!
Thank you!
L