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Mar 18, 2011
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Ikebana
Ikebana…
What order do you restore
in my tormenting life,
gaining my most trusted love.
Around you discipline
emanates with ease,
contenting carefully.
Your talent turns troubles away
peace unconsciously conveyed,
time will heal you state.
Perfect actions seem to
carry the hour with a worth,
driving home the cut.
Within your reason there’s
no rush, your voice calm
but firm, so silences
those with doubt.
Pruning such painful edges
that try to obscure feelings,
returning me from fret’s frown.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Foresting a life saver, with such a careful style..
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Roscoe Lane
14 years 4 months ago
Thank you,
Thank you for your comments, i can't change a you suggested. What i mean in that line is you state, as in a persons statement. Time will heal you state. Hope thats clear. Regards Roscoe..
Kailashana2
14 years 4 months ago
for you Roscoe....
for you Roscoe....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BIapgk7ordc&feature=related
~A
Roscoe Lane
14 years 4 months ago
Thank you,
Thank you Anna, Love Roscoe
Bonitaj
14 years 4 months ago
wow ROSCOE!
and there I thought you were speaking of some beautiful Japanese-type lady!
Good write!
Boni
Roscoe Lane
14 years 4 months ago
Maybe,
Maybe a subliminal message, thank you for your comment. Regards Roscoe..