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weirdelf

Dec 24, 2012 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Ill advised button pressing

People press my buttons
I have so many I psychically resemble a Dalek

Unfortunately the response is similar
“Exterminate. Exteminate you fuckers”

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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: Sydney, Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: The Romantics, The Mersey Sound, The Beats and, of course, The Bard

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12 years 6 months ago

Hello Jess

I found a difficulty in the title . May be it needs an apostrophe somewhere to read ( I'll )
but still doesn't make much sense. I am sure I've missed something.

I also had to google Dalek, (Please excuse my ignorance)

but I can simply say it is a typical Elf piece (especially the last words.) smiles

12 years 6 months ago

Ill as in sick or bad, no apostrophe missing

Did you Google image Dalek? See how many buttons they've got?
I felt it an apt metaphor for touchy irrascible people, not that I've ever met one [grins]

12 years 6 months ago

smiles

thanks for the clarification . too many buttons indeed.

12 years 6 months ago

ELF!

I didn't know you were a Doctor Who fan! Awesome!

12 years 6 months ago

I was a major fan till he screwed up my Mayan apocalypse.

He switched my blackhole router for a wireless router and instead of an apocalypse I got a re-run of Dawson's Creek, the bastard.