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I'll Read Your Smile

I read your smile
there is nothing lovelier
to me than
that gap between
nose and chin

It lights you up
the handsome version
with good teeth
that you've always been

I noticed your smile
before I noticed
your shoulders
head
hair
guile

Other women do too
when you jet off
on corporate jaunts
I fret the smile won't
be for me alone

But you return
all smiles
all manly
all delicious
like crisp apple plump

I read your smile
and I become avaricious
for the sweet juice
kiss

Then I'll read your smile
and I know you're mine
all mine
and all is bliss

About This Poem

Last Few Words: For my husband

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Sheffield, ENGLAND

Favorite Poets: I don't respond to bullying, especially intellectual bullying.

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Comments

Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 3 months ago

Betty

A grand smile that holds your heart, a loving write, Yours Ian.T

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Frenchf

12 years 3 months ago

Guile?

Not gile. But nice write

BettyBuff

BettyBuff

12 years 3 months ago

Thanks!

Ooops...brain not in gear! Thanks will change. Glad you liked it :))

Ells x