Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
Mar 19, 2013
⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
I'll Read Your Smile
I read your smile
there is nothing lovelier
to me than
that gap between
nose and chin
It lights you up
the handsome version
with good teeth
that you've always been
I noticed your smile
before I noticed
your shoulders
head
hair
guile
Other women do too
when you jet off
on corporate jaunts
I fret the smile won't
be for me alone
But you return
all smiles
all manly
all delicious
like crisp apple plump
I read your smile
and I become avaricious
for the sweet juice
kiss
Then I'll read your smile
and I know you're mine
all mine
and all is bliss
About This Poem
Last Few Words: For my husband
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
BettyBuff
12 years 3 months ago
This is for my husband. He
This is for my husband. He makes me happy.
Ian.T
12 years 3 months ago
Betty
A grand smile that holds your heart, a loving write, Yours Ian.T
Frenchf
12 years 3 months ago
Guile?
Not gile. But nice write
BettyBuff
12 years 3 months ago
Thanks!
Ooops...brain not in gear! Thanks will change. Glad you liked it :))
Ells x