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Jun 17, 2017
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I'm Misunderstood...
Tangerines and apples made school-days
Whatever happened to blue skies?
Muddy waters stir crazy and deep
I just want to know
The teeth that bite are red stained
No matter, if this doesn't rhyme
It's all a scam anyhow...
— Geezer, Jun 17, 2017
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
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wesley snow
8 years 11 months ago
This went over my head.
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