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May 17, 2015
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IMPERMANACE DECANTE
Krack a smile
would it hurt
tinfoil cheap capped yearling
Expunge your soiled heartbeat breast
and let the fizz of the jacked up
Beat talk best
Nothing like the rush of things
to better unbecome
Invisible
Raise a toast by the neck
and taste its Essence
This vessel
Bless it under this
vulgar rain dressed night
that we may be pure
Against the warmth
of this fire
kindled in our loins
..
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Comments
Esker
10 years 1 month ago
rushed journey
if you make it the first year
in any relationship your doing good
Odds rations...distractions
ex lovers...and interests
Love is an Overdose
and a crash bus humping you
off the line
a nurse pulling out the lines
when you come around
with the sweetest voice
the world tilts
heavy like a chrome pinball
caught in the sweet spot
of the flipper
when you bottom out
and know theres no
destination
and no adresse
to call that your home
...
emeka ozurumba
10 years 1 month ago
very exquisite
lovely poem and metaphors, the third stanza is very lyrical and lovely
Sparrow
10 years 1 month ago
Steve
A heart beat felt
A place of flashing lights
Turmoil
Seeking love
Throws of not knowing
Dream maker of excellence.
Bumping into reality
Is this a reality
The thought echoes.
Lovely write there Steve, now come home safe,
Yours Ian