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of impermanence

where is God?
then you will feel no necessity
of expressing such a desire
as within each one
burns a fire
of remorse
some time or the other
of anguish
as we live never together
in a modern world
flowing passed a violent current
of permanence
which we call
Impermanence
all things must change
as only impermanence remains

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 1 month ago

Loved

Could you sort out the start of this one as it is a little bitty, you start with:-
do read my poem,
where is God..
Then you go into a reasonably good write, so I is confused !!!! (a bit)
Reference to something else at the start of a write means nothing it just seemed a bit disjointed, Yours Ian.T

loved

loved

12 years 1 month ago

kay

shall soonest