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Apr 22, 2016
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Indelible Memoirs
No alphabets can conjoin
to form words to express
what lips and fingertips script
stroke after delightful stroke
a poem in invisible ink
of those intimate liquid moments
indelible
They come alive
when I close my eyes
like glow worms and goosebumps
with fingertips and nose tips
gently strumming the heartstrings
and amidst them I hear
in a heightened pitch
your sighs
on the wrinkled sheet I read
those verses
in shades of pink and scarlet
tinted in moonlight
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
9 years 2 months ago
An apt title raj.
An apt title raj.
Wonderful use of analogy.
But not sure about "glow worms" . I never thought that "worms" might be of any beauty. Maybe I am missing something?
raj
9 years 2 months ago
Thanks for being the only one
Thanks for being the only one to stop by, your time, read and comment...many find glow worms to be beautiful...
Regards,
Rula
9 years 2 months ago
My pleasure Raj
Thanks for teaching me something new. New vocab. and the "worms"? I don't think I can ever like them ;)
raj
9 years 2 months ago
Hi Rula
Another name for them is I think Fireflies...may be you will now know why I said glow worms look beautiful at night...
Regards,
Geezer
9 years 2 months ago
I thought...
this one very sensual and that maybe the worms had their own analogy. Yes, fireflies have a rare beauty about them; like earthbound stars floating through the garden. Nice work, ~ Gee
raj
9 years 2 months ago
Thank you Gee
Thank you Gee
Appreciate your visit, read and comment.
Regards,
jane210660
9 years 1 month ago
Beautiful
Beautiful
Just glimpsing through some of your poems, this is gorgeous. Jx
raj
9 years 1 month ago
Thank you Jane
Thank you Jane
Appreciate your taking the time to read this one and for your chimes...
Regards,