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Apr 10, 2014
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Infectious
I love the bubbles of her smile.
They tickle my heart and make me laugh.
Not just a giggle but a real howl
that makes me shake all over.
Then I walk away and I
hear that same laughter behind me.
I think they call it infectious.
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Ian.T
11 years 2 months ago
Capt J
We need more of this story take that laughter with you and let us know how you bring it to mind in the bad times so that things ain't so bad.
Yours Ian.T
lovedly
10 years 7 months ago
just upgrading less than two comments so old a lovely poem u
just upgrading less than two comments
so old
a lovely poem unread
heaven has now me
loved sent