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Jan 18, 2020
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Innate Desire
They came to say
about their experience
then dictated
they have gone
but not left unheard
hopefully
though human mind
has a limitation
it retains but little
for an indefinite
expanse of time
so even what I say
will not be ingrained
on the walls of Time
permanently
nor will I get name
in my living
as I chime
greed for fame
but
shall remain
for long impacted
on the psyche of human mind
till ordains it
my Time
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lovedly
5 years 3 months ago
I was hopeful
my dream would awaken
other dreamers like me
but corona makes them listless
all sleep
but then not reading
me don't weep