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Sep 07, 2014
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Insomnia
ongoing internal conversations
cloud what reality is slowly
sinking out of me
night shrounded in thoughts
and thoughts
and overanalyzations
distracting the unconscious
from drifting into dreams
and crippling the day
upon wake
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
mand
10 years 10 months ago
Hi there!
I could totally relate to this poem - as I suspect so could many others! I like the last two lines because they show that insomnia has a crippling effect upon waking - sometimes for a couple of days!
Yeh! I like it
Love Mand xxxx
Shamoneness
10 years 10 months ago
Mand,
Thank you! : )
Lonnie
10 years 10 months ago
Hi Shamoneness,
Good poem to ponder at three A.M. when I can't sleep! LOL!! Seriously, this is a wonderful write, that gets its message across quite profoundly!
Shamoneness
10 years 10 months ago
Thank
you very much Lonnie! : )