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Sep 16, 2011
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An Intermittent Rule of Thumbs
Please try and sever all your stupid ties
because she's so not into, you!
A heart that's died,
can't be denied,
it might be that it's your "cue"!
~
It's never going to get easier
so keep your cards close to the vest.
Put away that cross,
and start hitting the "sauce",
you can't beat 'em, so join the rest!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: It was a 10 line, "nonsense" contest. This poem received an honorable mention.
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction: How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
docmaverick
13 years 7 months ago
Thanx, Ian....
...just me, setting the "bar" a little lower with each write.
doc.
Kailashana2
13 years 7 months ago
The deck is stacked.
The deck is stacked.
Nonsense you say?
I wonder what the winning poem was if your's was honorable mention.
~A
docmaverick
13 years 7 months ago
Ah yes, dear ~A....
...it's the wonder of poetry that keeps us poets....guessing. Not sure what poem won, but I'll look that up.
doc.
scribbler
13 years 7 months ago
Hey Doc
Keep such "NONSENSE " coming lol............stan