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Inward Reasons

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On a hand-hewn pedestal
imagination coalesced;
on milk-white face alight
eyes sparkle with a liquid flame.

Some build ivory towers,
these hands raw from driven labour,
on scratched cheeks a stricken eye
ransoms a sculpted orphan dream.

Across time and Middle Sea
another calloused hand chiselled;
laughter on a pine-white face
resurrected an ailing heart.

Some can only imagine
what others have without trying;
when vicarious journeys fail,
reality's block they assail.

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About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: West Moreton, AUS

Favorite Poets: There is nothing quite as boring as a life completely devoid of shadows.

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M

magics02

14 years 3 months ago

Sigh

Wow Crypt I have to come back to read this again and it is about Grandmother, am I correct? Love to you and stay strong

Mona

Frederick Kesner

Frederick Kesner

14 years 3 months ago

This one is about

the inner processes of creativity within artists. It picks up from Pygmalion and Geppetto as a springboard for emotion.