It Buzzed My Om

at peace with eyes closed
my sweet Zen was chased away
pesky mosquito

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: United States

Favorite Poets: I tend to read Ted Kooser, Jim Harrison, Billy Collins, Paul Simon, Robert Frost. I like minimalist poetry, and poems reflecting on nature and Mother Earth.

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Comments

Candlewitch

11 months 2 weeks ago

Dear Lavender,

Ack!! that will do it every time, lol.

*hugs, Cat

Lavender

11 months 2 weeks ago

Hi, Cat!

I suppose if my Zen was a bit clearer, even the pesky mosquito wouldn't bother me!
Thank you for reading!
Lx

Rula

11 months 2 weeks ago

Dear Lavender

I will absolutely remember you and this annoying mosquito every time I got a mosquito bite:)
A very creative haiku dear.
Thank you for presenting"om". A always great to read you dear.