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Rula

Nov 26, 2018 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

It Didn't Rain!

It didn't rain.
So black and heavy
Are the clouds.

It didn't rain.

So thirsty is the land
And pale the lane.

It didn't rain.

The soul's crying,
Seeking cleansing
From the pain,
But
It didn't rain!

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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R

6 years 7 months ago

Welcome back Rula

Welcome back Rula

use of rain as a metaphor nicely used..
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6 years 7 months ago

Thank you

dear raj.
Appreciate it highly.

6 years 7 months ago

Hello Rula.

Hello Rula.
Great poem, so sad.
I like the repeated pattern. I worry you may cause a flood if you pray.
I want to re post your lines on Instagram. Ok?

6 years 7 months ago

Thank you

Dear IRiz. I feel really honoured.
You have my permission.

6 years 7 months ago

thank you very much Rula

thank you very much Rula for detailes
how to preview yours and other potential submission look for my last blog here on Neopoet

6 years 7 months ago

Mark

Wow!
Your comment means a lot:-)

P

6 years 7 months ago

It's poetry like this that

It's poetry like this that inspires me to keep writing.
I love it.