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It's Here, Somewhere
It’s there, sometimes
In between the strings of the present and the past
Hidden there in the fabric of space and reality
Making each moment more special than the last
It’s there, somehow
Emerging from the depths of the subconscious mind
As if you can almost touch and feel the intangible
Like an emotion becomes palpable and unconfined
It’s there, someway
Cradled amidst the stems of foundation and origin
With a profound sense of being and keen intellect
That everything else just pales in comparison
It’s here, somewhere
Buried under these lines, rhymes, notes and tones
With the hope that the mutual feeling brings absolution
With the hope that the words bring comfort to my bones
It’s here, somewhere in this poem
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction: Is the internal logic consistent?
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Sen99
2 months 1 week ago
A winning poem
The chant like repetition of the prompt "it's here ....." is effectively used for each stanza. The logic is consistent, what is unsaid and unwritten in verse, is just as meaningful as what is. its all hidden and buried somewhere, its here, something I've often thought about.
Well done, nice share
Sen99
Wallyroo92
1 month 3 weeks ago
It's Here, Somewhere
Thank you Sen,
I felt a connection to this piece for some reason, unable to quite pinpoint where it was but yet knowing it was exactly there, left open to interpretation and familiarity.
Geezer
2 months 1 week ago
Mutual feelings...
about poetry and fellowship, this brings a bit of understanding to the reader; the poet who hopes that he [or she] has written something that will resonate with the person who reads their words and brings the two closer together. Nicely done, ~ Geez.
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Wallyroo92
1 month 3 weeks ago
It's Here, Somewhere
You hit the nail right on the head. Yes, the mutual feelings amidst poets is what we strive for. I felt a sense of accomplishment when I completed this piece.
Thank you very much for your comment.