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May 12, 2025
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It's May
It's May
Marigolds pop up
to swing and sway and
hopefully
stay.
Then,
they may,
oh how I wish,
that they'd pop up
again,
Mayhap
next May?
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
1 month 1 week ago
Hello my friend,
I love the style of this poem and the way it is structured! It is sincerely hopeful. Nice flow through!
your, Candle
Rula
1 month 1 week ago
Dearest Candle
The pleasure is mine. I wish I can always send a message with hope. It's the best any poet can do, I believe!
Thank you as always!
Frederick Kesner
1 month ago
It never ceases to amaze my
It never ceases to amaze my how quickly or slowly the seasons come and go... this poem encapsulates this event in the springtime rather succinctly. Most definitely a beautiful read.