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Nov 08, 2022
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It's A Miracle...
I thought the word was marvelous
and so, I wrote it down
Then I looked to see
and the word was really miraculous
Now, what do I do?
I just change the word I thought was marvelous
to make it miraculous
and send it right off to you.
Now, before I send it this time
I will check to make quite sure
that it really is miraculous
and not marvelous
so, I can change it before I do
I mean wouldn't it be a joke
if in between a few tokes
that the word was marvelously
turned into a miracle
and the word was miraculous?
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
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Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Geezer
2 years 8 months ago
Thank you...
it's a pleasure to do something, that requires a little thinking for a change. ~ Geez.
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RoseBlack
2 years 8 months ago
This is great
What a fun poem! I love the interchanging of marvelous and miraculous. Made for a very lighthearted well written piece.
Geezer
2 years 8 months ago
Glad I lightened...
things up a bit. I had fun with it, and I am delighted that I made somebody laugh. ~ Geez.
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