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Feb 18, 2019
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Like a jewel
Sparkling Shining Dazzling
A Diamond ring
A Ruby set in a stone
Polished Opal
Glittering Emerald
Splendid to see
Just like a jewel
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Dear Neopoets do you like my poem. Send me your comments. Eulekia
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
6 years 4 months ago
I am a big fan...
of short, simple verse and stories, but this seems a little extreme. I felt like I was looking at "sparklies" through the eyes of a raven or magpie. When you see them in that light, they are indeed, a jewel. I need something more than a list of gems. ~ Geezer.
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