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Dec 29, 2016
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Johnny Smiles
street lamp halo
glows
black and white
pouty girls
trouble
doused in patchouli
and misty rain
footsteps
intrigue in a panama hat
the shift:
a sultry stance,
the deal, the dance
(fear,
a luxury ill afforded,
but that "sooner or later"
comes to pass)
one makes Johnny happy
the other,
never makes it home
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Esker
8 years 6 months ago
the great stumble in the jungle!
risks of walking it alone...
pride says..I dont care...
the invisibles..
keeps those with intuition
and those that dont about..
great Poem! Al!
Mr Wolf!