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Sep 25, 2020
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The journey of life
Life is only the journey
from which we as a
purpose seeking society embark on
and from there I see only one path
the path in which we venture
into the unknown realm of
death and finally face our
fear of the enigma.
About This Poem
Review Request Direction:
How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lovedly
4 years 9 months ago
young brave poet I have realighned your poem
Life is only a journey
from which we
as a purpose seeking society
embark on
from there
I see only one path
that in which we venture
into the unknown realms
of death
finally to face our fear
of impending enigma
I hope you will like it ....you are a man ///young one with courage
lovedly
Edward nigma
4 years 9 months ago
Thank you
I hope your doing fine in this time of mass hysteria
c lynn brooks
4 years 9 months ago
Edward
again I might suggest stanzas easier to read you may get even more reviews of your work
Edward nigma
4 years 9 months ago
Thank you
I don’t know how to use stanzas or I don’t understand stanzas
Anyways I hope your doing well in this time of mass hysteria that plagues our populous