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Aug 27, 2012
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JOURNEY--updated
JOURNEY
I think it’s time
you find your way
to my front door.
Things aren’t the same
as they were before.
Today is suddenly tomorrow
and each day is
one more borrowed.
No wondering.
No guessing
No playing the odds
anymore
Yes.
I think it’s time
you take me
home/
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ian.T
12 years 10 months ago
Joe
Like the piece but not the theme, the days will pass without tempting them to move faster or slower.
A winter comes to all of us as you are aware, so let us not worry about that time as yet.
You have many more words to put together for us to read, Yours Ian.T
Geremia
12 years 10 months ago
Yes. I feel that I do have
Yes. I feel that I do have many more words to write. Thamk you for your encouragement, Ian.
Ian.T
12 years 10 months ago
Good
Now let's say no more, and just get on with it. LOL
Yours Ian.T
Geremia
12 years 10 months ago
:)
:)