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Sep 10, 2014
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A JOURNEY WITHOUT DESTINATION
Too far down the road
have we travelled
in too short a span of time
No turning back now
the engine has whirred
into motion
My innuendo
and subtle overtures
becoming more brazen
by the moment
your shy, awkward
and gently yielding responses
released race horses
into my blood
What started out as a
spark is now
an engulfing flame
My cup of erotica
offered to you
is mixed with uncertainty
and crawls
with guilt
Did I need to
steer this unsullied
relationship
down a complicated
path
of uncertainty
to a point of no return
and no arrival
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
raj
10 years 10 months ago
Leonard
The title fits this poem like a glove. The internal commotion caused by an unsullied relationship expressed profoundly.
Regards,
Leonard
10 years 10 months ago
Thank you Raj
Your visits and comments mean a lot to me.
Cheers mate
Lonnie
10 years 10 months ago
Hello Leonard
I found a typo, I believe, line 17 the word AND should be AN, if I'm reading the thought pattern right, LOL!! You have captured a good theme here and the poem is very readable!
Leonard
10 years 10 months ago
Thanks Lonie
for visiting and pointing out the typo. I have corrected it.