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Dec 24, 2010
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JOURNEY'S PURPOSE
Following a guiding star
so long ago and far away
three strangers traveled oh so far
( what did they do along the way?)
On their way to a small town
in a poor and arid land
sleeping nights on stony ground
or on good nights, soft shifting sand
When they finally saw the swaddled child
and gave the gifts that they had brought
as the infant faintly smiled
did they know how he'd change human thought ?
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
scribbler
14 years 7 months ago
Hmmm....
When I originally typed in travelled ( and just now) spell check said it was wrong. Guess I'll check dictionary. I'll blame other mistakes on haste. Thanks for the proof read.Hope your day goes well..............stan
scribbler
14 years 7 months ago
Hmmm....
When I originally typed in travelled ( and just now) spell check said it was wrong. Guess I'll check dictionary. I'll blame other mistakes on haste. Thanks for the proof read.Hope your day goes well..............stan
scribbler
14 years 7 months ago
purpose
hope you don't mind me transferring it off your blog...............stan
scribbler
14 years 7 months ago
journey
I had thought of making my poem longer, humorous and calling it the three wise asses but had already assaulted ya'll with bernstein's Christmas lol. I like yours and hope the best for you................stan