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Jun 13, 2025
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June’s Garden
The roses in the garden are especially beautiful and multitudinous this summer
They stand proud and open in their unapologetic, stunning way
As if they are ignorant or unaware of the world crumbling around them
Or perhaps they’re just tenacious and brave
Perhaps we are those roses
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Lavender
3 months 2 weeks ago
June's Garden
Hello, Tim,
Beautiful. I hope we are brave, and not ignorant or unaware. Much to think about within your brief poem.
Hope you're well!
Thank you,
L
Jokerface82
3 months 2 weeks ago
Great
Love the personification and metaphor