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Aug 26, 2014
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just a comparison
compare
Life with seasons
Intelligence with common sense
Humans with animals
and
Rivers with life's sojourn
we come
to go
and
then
merge with the bigger one
we resurrect
as vapours
back to heaven
after life goes passed
half past seven
why half past seven?
well that's my rising time
each day
until I pass away!'
one day.....
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
10 years 10 months ago
Hello Loved
I was reading and comparing
when I came through the
"half past seven"
then while asking why half past seven
You gave the answer
and it was really pleasant to know the reason.
Your raising time ha?
Amazing!
I really like this one.
lovedly
10 years 10 months ago
thanks rula
u got the message right
but glad u did not say rising
and all should keep it a secret
thanks rula