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Jul 23, 2023
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just one more time
To feel ur love just one more time
To kiss your lips just one more time
To feel ur embrace just one more time
To hold ur ur arms just one more time
To feel ur touch just one more time time
To caress your skin just one more time
To feel ur gaze just one more time
to look into ur eyes just one more time
To hear your voice just one more time
To feel your presence just one more time
just one more time i wish we could laugh
just one more time i wish we could share a home
just one mode time i wish we share a cuddle
just one more time i wish we could share an accomplishment
just one more time i wish we could share our love
just one more time i wish i could call u baby .call u mine call u my soulmate call u my forever
just one more time
till eterny
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