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Nov 05, 2012
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just remember me too...
just remember me too
for having read you
like a passer by...
It is a wonderful
first time poetry
I have read of yours
I wonder if you have glossed over
any of mine...
though none will or would be
as comparable with yours
just remember me
across the green fields
or those with yellow blooming seeds
as your desire to be remembered surpasses all
and as you say....
if you can't remember me
then I will still continue
to remember thee
to read your luscious poetry
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ian.T
12 years 8 months ago
Loved
We will remember you, across ocean's and fields of green with a scattering of Yellow, touched by the gold of the God's, that they should watch over us always. You could always have a smile and read my walk poem it would be nice to have someone read it lol, it is so lonely.
Yours as always Ian.T
loved
12 years 8 months ago
how can one as prolific as you ever be
lonely
you offer such lovely contributions,
to every one's poetry,
surely your walk one
I shall read it.
Ian.T
12 years 8 months ago
Loved
Is Loved
loved
12 years 8 months ago
so be it
loved be loved by all
neopoets afterall