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Rula

Jan 25, 2021 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Just a Thought

There's a poem
in everyone's bag
that speaks of dreams,
wishes and prayers,

Release it.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Just a thought...

Style/Type: Free verse

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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4 years 5 months ago

Hello Teddy

Thank you for reading and sharing your priceless thoughts. The title just reflects the idea that this is not in any way a poem, or _this is what I thought_ but I'll spare your title for sth that is more wise in the future to deserve it.
Now the ending, mmmm, are you saying that the word release is not properly used?

4 years 5 months ago

True

The world is an ocean of poems and we must draw from it.

4 years 5 months ago

Chima

Always great to get a new friend reading my words.
Always appreciated.

4 years 5 months ago

Just a Thought

Hi, Rula,
Calming. Soothing. Affirmative. Very zen. I rather like the last line as it is...a very peaceful, slow and deliberate release.
Thank you,
L

4 years 5 months ago

Dear Lavender

Your commrnts really bring happiness up to my home.
All the respect dear sweet friend.

4 years 5 months ago

Dear Rula,

As Lavender said, this was very relaxing and soothing to read, and I liked the flow! Great work. :)

4 years 5 months ago

Hello dear

As I said, always appreciate getting new audience to read my words. I feel lucky to have you all, really.
Thank you so much