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Oct 16, 2018
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Is justice served?
What separates a human from a beast
both have instinct
one tells lies
other doesn't know what lie is
and is sacrificed
world watches in disbelief
at the injustice
realizing it's politics
where the beast is sworn as Justice
believe it or not, that Just is
reminding me of George Orwell
"some are more equal than others"
in the Animal Kingdom
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Sparrow
6 years 3 months ago
raj
This one needs a body, it has come over as a little loose, maybe the continuity is a little off..
Take care and let me know how you are,
Yours as always, Ian..