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Jul 06, 2015
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keep posting some one may be reading ------damned
Time
ad infinitum
Man you talk of a time
ad infinitum
we will not be therein
then what cream
would you cherish
but simply white and human!
I wonder man
at least enjoy your today
when life came about
all was cold
now to heat we are becoming
touchy and bloody bold
what the hell
those who were iced
now enjoy heat- like
and
those like we two
only love to play
the politically poetic dice
the game of cats and mice
which is your side
for a ride?
AND
who’s going to throw the dice?
and who shall pay the price?
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Seren
10 years ago
Lovely
I'm reading keep writing my friend
if you take out the ego the words will flow
Ad infinitum
Love Jayne x
lovedly
10 years ago
i have Cancer of EGO
how will it ever go ?
yet I flow
thanks let go!
Seren
10 years ago
Please DON'T use the Cancer
Please DON'T use the Cancer word even worse you used it with regards to your ego ?
Tut tut ... J
lovedly
10 years ago
what ever
can't separate it ever
Seren
10 years ago
What ever ? Really ? Jayne
What ever ? Really ?
Jayne
weirdelf
10 years ago
You pay the price
for writing pseudo-profound crap poetry.
This is not a gem.
lovedly
10 years ago
i know
i love gems tasty
weirdelf
10 years ago
I don't.
Stop writing self-indulgent crap. Stop pleading for attention like an 8 year girl.
Write righting like the good poet you can be and everyone will stop taking you like a pathetic joke.
lovedly
10 years ago
Glycerine drops will not work they are fake ok
Glycerine drops will not work
they are fake
these glycerine drops
will not work
they are fake
only on actor's screens they work
Tears just roll
as in love
no don't fake
em my love
weirdelf
10 years ago
see?
obscure bullshit
lovedly
10 years ago
are u on
medicine
Seren
10 years ago
Lovedly I will not ever haunt
Lovedly I will not ever haunt your page as your just plain cruel
And I wont become a clown in your circus anymore
But I know the show will go on
Your ego demands it
J
lovedly
10 years ago
O what a peach
O what
ur a peach