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Dec 22, 2015
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KICKING IT
KICKING IT
I want to write a poem
that would wow you all
but I have no reason to
I’m in a mood indigo-blue
I awoke to thoughts that
killed my nighttime dreams
and suddenly I fell
into the realities
of my days in hell.
there is not much more
to say
I’m finished. I’m done.
I’m fading away
at warp speed
there is nothing left of me
I’m off my “grid” and ready
to kick it all in
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
9 years 6 months ago
Sharp...
and clear emotion! You say that you have nothing left, yet I see the ashes leaving a picture of the man that has given more than he knows. Peace and love to you. ~ Gee
Geremia
9 years 6 months ago
I was overwhelmed by your
I was overwhelmed by your wonderful comment. We all are the ashes that we will leave behind, but we are also the bright light that will go on.
Merry Christmas, Geez
joe.
Esker
9 years 6 months ago
OFF the ol grid
I remember those times
still feel its chill
hear you
still like how you write real
thank U
Geremia
9 years 6 months ago
Thanks, Steven. I am writing
Thanks, Steven. I am writing furiously before can't write anymore.