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Oct 18, 2015
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Kindness of the Unknown
Kindness of the unknown
It's all kindness of the unknown...
human
who helps one...
to help another...
such a one are you...
my friends all
my destiny
in wilderness
lies destiny
where is she
standing
hiding
climbing
swimming or flying
in the blue skies
where is she behind forest trees
asking me
ask my dear
your destiny
then only come to me
you make us rely
on destiny
we will be on our haunches
till eternity
so fly as these birds do
kindness of the unknown
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geremia
9 years 8 months ago
ypur poetry has become
ypur poetry has become heartfelt and more ""musical"" Bravo., my friend
joe
lovedly
9 years 8 months ago
and the credit goes to you.... Joe
as u also uplift
as much as I do
I am always with you
what a pleasure
Joe
to know you
Geremia
9 years 8 months ago
And I you :)
And I you :)
lovedly
9 years 8 months ago
all smiles Joe
what a pleasure
it would have been
if we each other
had seen