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Dec 04, 2010
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klaxon's holler
terrible wish that all will be fine
screaming in a foggy night
without a sound heard
by any ear
but the one in your head
a kind of madness
that sound begets
hardly delicate --
klaxon's shriek of awareness
sounding doom on one note only
sounded first on first day
plays
long through years
'til last day
in human ears
loudest at the end --
then silent
over -- it's over
silence gathers
gladly
omniscience
alive if not well
a starship traveling
infinity alone
to end and back again
torn -- trying to be whole
in cold of space --
can still be heard
klaxon's holler
mindlessly braying
on one note.
vcp
3 December 2010
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Victorclaude
14 years 7 months ago
Ian,
Ian,
I guess I don't see the complexity as you have, but that's ok, and understandable.
Thanks for the read.
Victor
weirdelf
10 years 6 months ago
this poem needs more dialogue
It has a powerful feel but I can't quite place where it needs work.
Memorable
Kailashana2
10 years 6 months ago
Wonder where Victor is.
Wonder where Victor is.
Mindless braying.... I do that too...