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The Knight Of An Modern Time
A man who carries a boulder on his shoulder
his naked necrotic stature
trembling amongst a long stretch of road
stretching between
two differing valleys of reflection.
Purposely portraying
realities wrapped in decorative ribbons
of decisive deceit
wildly professing the cemented path
pathed before his noble feet.
He an knight birthed
from breaking bowels
of dirt stained tin
trotting against the grain.
Buried in his own
iridescence of forgotten honor
he raises his grizzled
chin towards the
winding river of stars.
Faced with the last torn pages
of his lost story
he casts his beholden blade
like a comet
sparkling before
the stagnant streetlights.
Towards the
incandescent
dust filled laughter
of an elated legend .
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Lavender
1 month ago
The Knight of a Modern Time
Hello, Edward!
So good to see your writing. I can envision this almost-super human being rising above all trials and conflict, his dignity arming him like a sword. Your alliteration and language is wonderful. It is your imagery and depth that fuels the poem.
Thank you so much!
L
|Edward nigma
1 month ago
Thank you
I was listening to Gordon Lightfoot’s song Don Quixote , and it gave me this idea of an knight fleeting from a forgotten time and wilting in the modern day comes to terms with his destiny.