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Feb 07, 2024
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Knowing
We know starfish live in the ocean.
We know delicate wildflowers grow
between mighty mountain rocks.
We know that layers, upon layers
of sky swells above us, over us...
beyond us.
Sometimes, I think of such things.
However they came to be,
and whoever created such exultation,
I wonder...
do they know me, too?
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
1 year 5 months ago
Dear Lavender,
I see your wonderfully expressive and creative mind has been busy again. I ponder the same questions. My mind is a real mess right now.
*hugs, Cat
Lavender
1 year 5 months ago
Hello, Cat,
A simple pondering in awe imagining that I live among such incredible creations. Sometimes I step back...everything is immaculately connected.
Thank you for reading!
L
Ruby Lord
1 year 5 months ago
The eternal question. If we
The eternal question. If we meet our maker, will she reveal herself to us or has she already done so in mother earth? Ruby :) xx
Lavender
1 year 5 months ago
Hello, Ruby,
Love your comment. I see the face and spirit of our creator revealed in all these glorious things - it boggles my mind to know that I, a tiny speck, am included and a part of the big picture.
Thank you for reading!
Lx
RoseBlack
1 year 5 months ago
The elusive creator
Whoever that may be. I think we all have our own interpretation and thoughts about them and have all pondered existence even in its simplest form. A beautiful, reflective piece that gives your reader something to consider.
Lavender
1 year 5 months ago
Hello, Carrie,
I seem to ponder on this more and more as I get older. Thank you so much for reading, as always!
Lx