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Jul 17, 2011
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Kompliance
arousal this heat
sensous swirling
while the crows speak
sonnets and the ciccada
hums disguised against
the trunks in shade
wind in the high tension
wires moaning
this glaze of cloud like
dinner plate porcelain
a page of dreams
evoked by the mischeif
of chimes in empty backyards
thoughts wandered to you
across the spendid waters
in the curve of sleep
supine and peaceful
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Comments
DawningDaytripper
13 years 12 months ago
Very smooth and flowing Esker
Very smooth and flowing Esker, Org, Steven. What shall I call you now, you man of many names. Each one a differant face to the same being. A being of light and dark, forever free'ed by the words. Ecept for what I will assume is a misspell in your last verse, "spendid" did you mean suspended, or such maybe? Long time no see friend, I hope to see you more often.
Esker
13 years 12 months ago
"Suspended"
how marvelous I meant splendid but I love "suspended"
this is why I misspell and never use punctuation
its harder to read it interpret it but it leaves additions to add
to ponder Thank you for this notation ..
Geezer
13 years 12 months ago
Oh, what memories...
we keep! you blend the natural world with daydreams so wonderfully. I am still amazed! Another great write my friend. I think you meant [ splendid ]? ~ Gee
Esker
13 years 12 months ago
haze trace
spend so much time in thought maybe it is like a dreamworld
full of visual stimuli and words such connections to all things
memories especially and happenings of the Now rich in their
flow vivid in their occurence all the corners sharp and soft..