L O L H U M O R

YOU ALL MUST BY NOW KNOW
SO MANY poems you do miss on purpose

But when I compose a poem
I DON'T KNOW
WHETHER I AM A MAN OR WOMAN

I cover all human
all like vision
like desire
all need warmth and fire
I can't fulfill everyone's desire
so poetry salvos
I freely fire
some see me nude
some imagine
am I crude
not rude or too prude

still I love you
the bikini was borrowed
you know
inner wears
I don't wear also
BEING RETIRED AND AGED
I STAY ALL DAY AT HOME
NOW SHIFTING TO ROME
VENICE THEY SAY
IS A LOVELY PLACE TO ROAM
LIKE AT HOME

DID YOU NOT KNOW...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

scribbler

4 years 5 months ago

Well

I could have done without the naked loved visual lol

lovedly

4 years 4 months ago

yes in ROME 15

All wear
ONLY ROBES.
and drop 'em often..

Ray Whitaker

4 years 4 months ago

a nice piece,

however the last lines are IMHO abrupt. I like the humor. Being retired, and no longer needing to wear the scrubs, or come home with blood on my shoes... i like the "The Bikini was borrowed." I wonder if using Speedos somewhere would work ....
Like
"Shifting to Rome in speedos"
or something like that...

lovedly

4 years 4 months ago

ha ha

shall tomorrow
when another humour
I borrow