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Dec 21, 2015
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LA PETITE MORT [ English]
LA PETITE MORT
[English]
I feel my life force begin to weaken
a flickering flame on a candle
and my spirit resists a surrender
to an undetermined disconnect
not of its knowing.
my mind is clear to what
my heart will not see...
and my soul sorrows
for the pity of it all.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
alidzain
9 years 6 months ago
Joe
I feel the struggle.
Alid
Geremia
9 years 6 months ago
Yes, Alid, every day. Thanks
Yes, Alid, every day. Thanks, my friend.
joe
alidzain
9 years 6 months ago
Joe
I know pain
it can drive you insane.
Devoid of comfort,
forced to face the hurt.
You wait for it to end,
its a matter of when
but it stretched forever
and ever and ever..
Alid
Geremia
9 years 6 months ago
...through time eternal,,,
...through time eternal,,,
God have mercy on us all
Esker
9 years 6 months ago
horrible and accurate
that U go through this...and your work is vivid of the descripts of what it is
doing....our mortality and humanity..great poetry!!
thank U
Geremia
9 years 6 months ago
Thanks, Steven. I am an
Thanks, Steven. I am an oxymoron/
joe